Well let's see... This is my very first critique so lets see how this go. Hmm... Well I honestly love the concept for this chracter so I won't make this to long. I can't wait to see a more detailed picture of this chracter, I would go for kind of a more steampunkish look to him in the final more finished look. The empire your chracter is coming from is VERY rugged, dirty and probably not the nicest people in the world, so if your coming from the father land of Dragunov you may want it to reflect it a bit more in the detailed version. (I.E maybe some steampunk accents and what not. ((Gears watches you know what I mean)) I will also need a list of one or two elements that he has an affinity for. Since your from Dragunov your chracter will have strong special attack and probably some enchacing or hindering magic but they will all have a base element. Also you can get creative with your weapon if you want, you can keep it just the way it is or the blade could be made out of energy from your element so on and so forth. Overall I am very pleased with how he turned out and I can't wait for the full bio to be put up! Keep up the good work!